tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post5711289784613579409..comments2024-03-05T06:55:21.597-05:00Comments on Dori Reads: Douglas Florian Dorainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-72158798075610008032016-04-03T21:00:05.833-04:002016-04-03T21:00:05.833-04:00I'll go back and find that one from J. Patrick...I'll go back and find that one from J. Patrick Lewis in the gallery. So much springy-ness to choose from!Dorainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-21244284368526505282016-04-03T20:58:32.792-04:002016-04-03T20:58:32.792-04:00Thanks, Joy. They are a lot of fun to write.Thanks, Joy. They are a lot of fun to write.Dorainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-18117591705100102802016-04-03T20:57:57.183-04:002016-04-03T20:57:57.183-04:00I had not consciously thought of "it" as...I had not consciously thought of "it" as an anchor, but that does resonate with me. Dorainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-2085520309543237182016-04-03T20:57:08.279-04:002016-04-03T20:57:08.279-04:00Yeah, that spacing was a bit of a trick!Yeah, that spacing was a bit of a trick!Dorainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-20421123611255306542016-04-03T08:38:51.059-04:002016-04-03T08:38:51.059-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-70830650467715426932016-04-03T08:38:41.613-04:002016-04-03T08:38:41.613-04:00Doraine, your concrete poem is so visual not only ...Doraine, your concrete poem is so visual not only in its form but in its thoughts. I can actually see the rock clip-clopping the water. I think I will have to try this poem. In my Winter Wanderings Gallery, J. Patrick Lewis has a concrete poem for us. You may want to sent me this poem with the picture of the creek for the spring gallery.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-82150325705901829562016-04-03T00:36:32.346-04:002016-04-03T00:36:32.346-04:00Doraine,
Your poem is NOT an imitation. It is y...Doraine,<br /> Your poem is NOT an imitation. It is your own beautiful original creation. What an excellent job of writing a concrete poem. Well done.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-15394307900163956792016-04-02T23:37:21.765-04:002016-04-02T23:37:21.765-04:00Love your spacing, not only of the letters, but th...Love your spacing, not only of the letters, but the repetition of "it," which acts as a visual anchor until it's time to fall beneath the surface. Very nice!Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-49857263246414276762016-04-02T16:40:57.389-04:002016-04-02T16:40:57.389-04:00Love your poem, Doraine, from the first flip of wr...Love your poem, Doraine, from the first flip of wrist to satisfying ending! <br />I'm a big Florian fan, too. <br />I also am quite impressed that you were able to format all of this so well in blog-land; I'm not so talented in that dept.<br />Happy NPM!Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.com