tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post952308075596698259..comments2024-03-05T06:55:21.597-05:00Comments on Dori Reads: Line Three of the Progressive PoemDorainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-27803156658424732732017-04-14T00:49:17.111-04:002017-04-14T00:49:17.111-04:00I love that you added stories in here.I love that you added stories in here.Brenda at FriendlyFairyTaleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13368709489341876324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-85496606534232807382017-04-06T15:15:54.526-04:002017-04-06T15:15:54.526-04:00Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh! I am late but I am happy...Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh! I am late but I am happy in my mouth. xAmy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-65013018106968099552017-04-05T01:30:11.328-04:002017-04-05T01:30:11.328-04:00I'm loving the build of this poem.I'm loving the build of this poem. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-35995064024224522462017-04-03T23:42:13.889-04:002017-04-03T23:42:13.889-04:00The door of possibilites is wide open, and growing...The door of possibilites is wide open, and growing!michelle koganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16409095111952431780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-80498691700615340892017-04-03T20:59:07.606-04:002017-04-03T20:59:07.606-04:00The crackle of fire, somewhere in the realm of cas...The crackle of fire, somewhere in the realm of castles--I love it, Dori. Let's see where the kid-crackle goes!Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-63950251470352327632017-04-03T19:51:02.838-04:002017-04-03T19:51:02.838-04:00Thanks for feeding me a great line, Dori! I like w...Thanks for feeding me a great line, Dori! I like what you did with the slant rhyme. It's turning out to be such a fun, energized poem, who needs a formal rhyme scheme?!Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-41887586453695447592017-04-03T15:28:27.324-04:002017-04-03T15:28:27.324-04:00I like it! I like it! Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-9455288165186644492017-04-03T15:04:16.151-04:002017-04-03T15:04:16.151-04:00--and the energy continues! Yay, Doraine - :0)--and the energy continues! Yay, Doraine - :0)Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-50524292330981680262017-04-03T11:57:09.856-04:002017-04-03T11:57:09.856-04:00I love that Irene stressed that this year the poem...I love that Irene stressed that this year the poem be for kids and I love that your line (and the previous lines) will appeal to kids. Great line!Penny Parker Klostermannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043861965501388155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-51183764972088252972017-04-03T10:58:14.962-04:002017-04-03T10:58:14.962-04:00Lovely--the language so far is such fun!Lovely--the language so far is such fun!laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-47492389561137755372017-04-03T09:48:27.927-04:002017-04-03T09:48:27.927-04:00I am still getting so many images...nice and open....I am still getting so many images...nice and open...<br />Yay!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-30132690904671048672017-04-03T09:44:23.985-04:002017-04-03T09:44:23.985-04:00Terrific! Now you've opened up new ideas about...Terrific! Now you've opened up new ideas about this character and what he or she might do. Thanks, Dori!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4697562568281773339.post-72300465186285899342017-04-03T09:35:33.241-04:002017-04-03T09:35:33.241-04:00Nicely done!! I enjoy the freedom of not being hem...Nicely done!! I enjoy the freedom of not being hemmed into a particular rhyme scheme... and now we are getting a clearer picture of the setting... thank you! xoIrene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.com