Welcome to my favorite National Poetry Month activity, dreamed up and monitored by the lovely Irene Latham!
I love the progressive poem, the way each day a new poet wrestles a line from his or her interior journey, fixes a string of words onto the last, and waits to see how thoughts so simple, so individual, transform the whole, while at the same time are transformed themselves by this living, breathing poem.
This little mermaid slipping through bayou is just too safe and tranquil for me, so let's infuse a little intrigue! Maybe she'll wish for a net. I'm handing this off to Renée at No Water River to see what happens next.
She lives without a net, walking along the alluvium of the delta.
Shoes swing over her shoulder, on her bare feet stick jeweled flecks of dark mica.
Hands faster than fish swing at the ends of bare brown arms. Her hair flows,
snows in wild wind as she digs in the indigo varnished handbag,
pulls out her grandmother’s oval cuffed bracelet,
strokes the turquoise stones, and steps through the curved doorway.
Tripping on her tail she slips hair first down the slide… splash!
She glides past glossy water hyacinth to shimmer with a school of shad,
listens to the ibises roosting in the trees of the cypress swamp–
an echo of Grandmother’s words, still fresh in her windswept memory.
Born from the oyster, expect the pearl.
Reach for the rainbow reflection on the smallest dewdrop.
The surface glistens, a shadow slips above her head, a paddle dips
Follow the progress below:
1 Jone at Check it Out
2 Joy at Poetry for Kids Joy
3 Heidi at My Juicy Little Universe
4 Laura at Writing the World for Kids
5 Charles at Poetry Time Blog
6 Ramona at Pleasures from the Page
7 Catherine at Catherine Johnson
8 Irene at Live Your Poem
9 Mary Lee at Poetrepository
10 Michelle at Today’s Little Ditty
11 Kim at Flukeprints
12 Margaret at Reflections on the Teche
13 Doraine at DoriReads
14 Renee at No Water River
15 Robyn at Life on the Deckle Edge
16 Ruth at There is No Such Thing as a Godforsaken Town
17 Buffy at Buffy’s Blog
18 Sheila at Sheila Renfro
19 Linda at Teacher Dance
20 Penny at A Penny and her Jots
21 Tara at A Teaching Life
22 Pat at Writer on a Horse
23 Tamera at The Writer’s Whimsy
24 Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect
25 Tabatha at The Opposite of indifference
26 Brian at Walk the Walk
27 Jan at Bookseedstudio
28 Amy at The Poem Farm
29 Donna at Mainely Write
30 Matt at Radio, Rhythm & Rhyme
Oh my, Dori, love each verb, "glistens, slips, dips" & that little rhyme. Here she faces, what? Thanks for moving the story on.
ReplyDeleteOooh, danger danger, mermaid-girl! Thank you Doraine for this lovely line... I am definitely intrigued! xo
ReplyDeleteOoh how exciting! And so tenderly written too. I love the paddle dips. Great job, Dori!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful line, Doraine! But .... yikes! What happens now? I am frightened for tomorrow and for what might lay under the water...
ReplyDelete-- "shadow slips/paddle dips" - our intruder is a sly one, and you are a sly (and wonderful) writer, Doraine! OK - I'm kinda hoping Renee makes it all okay before she tosses the next line to me, but I'm having my doubts... :0!
ReplyDeleteDoraine, you certainly have introduced a bit of mystery and intrigue to the mermaid's tale. I like the addition of the word glistens that is juxtaposed with a shadow above her head.
ReplyDeleteStarting to get really nervous about my upcoming line! I love your line, though...
ReplyDeleteLove the surprise of the paddle dipping. Something is going to happen nooow... Can't wait to see.
ReplyDeleteDoraine! I never took you for a queen of intrigue, but perhaps I was wrong. ;) Thanks for rocking the boat, so to speak. I'm on the edge of my seat....
ReplyDeleteI giggled at your net line! Excited to have another soul in the poem. Yay intrigue!
ReplyDeleteI giggled at your net line! Excited to have another soul in the poem. Yay intrigue!
ReplyDeleteAh some action! What a fun line. It adds intrigue for sure. I'm off to see where Renée go!
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