"Imitation is not just the sincerest form of flattery - it's the sincerest
form of learning."— George Bernard Shaw
Welcome to Day 11 of FEET IN THE CREEK.
For each day I have chosen a favorite poem, a favorite poet, or a favorite friend. I will look at the work, decide what draws me to it, what makes it resonate for me, and then write my own poem about the creek with those techniques in mind. These are first drafts, so nothing will be especially polished, but they will be starting points for revision after the month is done. Feel free to follow along or join in.Today's poet is Nikki Giovanni, poet, writer, commentator, activist, and educator. You may enjoy listening to Maria Papova read some of Giovanni's poems here.
Illustrations by Larry Johnson ©2016 |
from Knoxville, Tennessee
Knoxville, Tennessee
by Nikki Giovanni
I always like summer
best
you can eat fresh corn
from daddy's garden
and okra
and greens
and cabbage
and lots of
barbecue
and listen to
gospel music
outside
at the church
homecoming
and got to the mountains with
your grandmother
and go barefooted
and be warm
all the time
not only when you go to bed
and sleep
© Nikki Giovanni, 1994. All rights reserved. Used by permission of the author.
My Intention: Write a list poem about a season on the creek.
Spring
I like spring best
when bare limbs
bud chartreuse
against olive
evergreens
and ferns
unfurl
to fan
creek banks
and broken
shells birth
chirping jays
and tadpoles
sprout legs
and mother
foxes tend
their babes
and I peel
off my socks
and dip
my feet
in the creek
and feel
like I am
brand new
© Doraine Bennett, 2016. All rights reserved.
Week 1 poets:
April 1: Ralph Fletcher
April 2: Douglas Florian
April 3: Progressive poem. Catch up here.
April 4: Michelle Heidenrich Barnes
April 5: Walt Whitman
April 6: Irene Latham
April 7: Carmen Bernos de Gasztold
Love your ending, especially!
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