Tricia hosts the Poetry Friday Roundup today at The Miss Rumphius Effect. Tricia's Monday poetry challenge this week was to write a climbing rhyme, so I tried it, played with it, revised, ditched it, and finally decided to post it.
A climbing rhyme uses internal rhyme in four syllable (or four word) lines. The pattern goes like this:
xxxa
xxax
xaxx
xxxb
xxbx
xbxx
xxxc
xxcx
xcxx
Here is my effort, along with a photo that shows you just how much snow is required for a snow day.
Snow Day
It's a snow day.
Go away. Please
don't say it's time
for sun to shine.
Don't remind me.
I whine and pout.
Don't make me pack
my book bag to
go back to school.
I want to play
one more day. Please,
snow, stay a while.
My memories of childhood in Michigan, in a poem! I remember sitting around the radio, waiting for school closings reports. Thanks for the memory.
ReplyDeleteBet you don't have many of those in Southern California!
ReplyDeleteI hope I can take time to try the climbing rhyme, Dori. Still reading Poetry Friday blogs along with the Saturday ones, too! I like the voice in your poem. We've had snow, & now cold again, but we're more used to it, so no snow day for us, yet! Glad you could stay in & enjoy the cocoa!
ReplyDeleteWeather in the Deep South can be pretty crazy. It went from 12 degrees Wednesday night to 70 degrees Sunday. That was quite a climb! ;)
DeleteWe had one of those "maybe" weather forecasts and nothing but rain this morning. I know there are a lot of disappointed Maryland children waking up in their inside-outed pajamas this morning, trudging off to school.
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